
I received a review copy courtesy of Net Galley
and Random House Alibi. It’s a short book, but the time I took to read it felt
like forever. The teaser says it is for fans of John Grisham, but this story is
nowhere even close to the caliber of Grisham’s legal thrillers. It isn’t much
of a thriller at all.
Our protagonist is Beth Swahn. An old school has come up for
sale, and there is all sorts of subterfuge involving nepotism, drug smugglers,
and international intrigue surrounding the deal to purchase it; Beth’s
stepfather is part of it. The premise is a decent one, but by the time the
author is done with it, it’s dead on arrival. The book will be available to the
public February 5, 2019.
There are overlong passages of deadly dull dialogue, and then
there are overlong passages of tedious narrative. The transitions are ragged,
and all told it is surprising to me that Random House would go anywhere near
this thing. It’s possible that the hand of a high profile editor might be
helpful, but were anyone to weed out the extraneous crud, what would be left
would be either a lengthy short story or a short novella. I would love to point
to some positives, but beyond the premise, I simply cannot find any.
Not recommended.